andrewd16
Nov 11, 2009
Writing Feedback / City and country living, which one will you choose? [3]
so far its good but can be improved. First off, i would try and make the intro a bit longer. And 2nd i think you should lose the first, 2nd, third, and in conclusion since they are so overdone these days
so far its good but can be improved. First off, i would try and make the intro a bit longer. And 2nd i think you should lose the first, 2nd, third, and in conclusion since they are so overdone these days