Scholarship / Study In UK Essay - Chevening chosen courses [3]

@azkaharia
I wish the best luck for your application.

I have some notes regarding your application:

- Regarding the second paragraph, I think you need to check the grammar as I can see some errors for instance, to solving => to solve, to achieving => to achieve. Also, you need to check the punctuation marks.

- Try to minimize the second paragraph and create a suitable conclusion to clarify your future plans.

Regards,