just_a_gene
Jan 16, 2020
Undergraduate / Uw AIF for computer science coop. Part A Question 1 [3]
As Holt mentioned, try to be more specific in your goals and what led you to them. For example, instead of just saying "Studying computer science will allow me to ..." you could say "Majoring in these fields will give me the tools to develop scientific and medical systems that can greatly benefit the research community and greater public." Another thing that I find helps is to mention a specific course you are looking forward to.
As Holt mentioned, try to be more specific in your goals and what led you to them. For example, instead of just saying "Studying computer science will allow me to ..." you could say "Majoring in these fields will give me the tools to develop scientific and medical systems that can greatly benefit the research community and greater public." Another thing that I find helps is to mention a specific course you are looking forward to.