holaamigo
Oct 12, 2009
Undergraduate / How my trip aborad helped me relized shelteredness - Common app short answer [2]
In the weeks I was in Nicaragua, I witnessed much. I observed a thirteen year old mother breast feed while sniffing shoe-glue to get high. I looked on as a ring of excited patrons at the bull fight gathered around a freshly gored man. I watched a crowd of motorists, eager to take pictures of the dead from car accident, form on the roadside. I was shocked and appalled at the daily life I saw. Though I had always known that the land of my mother and the land of mine were very different, I never expected to be so jarred. This stark contrast revealed to me just how sheltered I was in the United States, and it is through this that I found a need to take action in global issues.
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In the weeks I was in Nicaragua, I witnessed much. I observed a thirteen year old mother breast feed while sniffing shoe-glue to get high. I looked on as a ring of excited patrons at the bull fight gathered around a freshly gored man. I watched a crowd of motorists, eager to take pictures of the dead from car accident, form on the roadside. I was shocked and appalled at the daily life I saw. Though I had always known that the land of my mother and the land of mine were very different, I never expected to be so jarred. This stark contrast revealed to me just how sheltered I was in the United States, and it is through this that I found a need to take action in global issues.
CRITIQUE COMMENT PLEASE
