Writing Feedback / Task 1: University subjects chosen, 2005. [3]

The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female students chosing certain university topis in the specific 2005.
It is clear that the number of students chosing social sciences in university was highest in all 8 subjects. Remarkably, the number of men was higher than that of women in the sciences, mathematics, law, literature, the opposite was true for the others in 2005.

The number of males selecting sciences in university was twice as high as that of females, at about 22 and 11 thousand people respectively, compared to nearly 19 thousand men joining mathematics were high fourfold the number of women, at roughly 4 thousand. For literature and law class, the number of males was more than the number of females at about from 4 to 5 million people.

It is remarkable that Social Sciences was the most attractive to women students, with around 24 thousand students, compared to about 18 million females and 2 million males participating in the Languages class. While the number of women joining the humanities class was equal the figure for men, at about 11 million, the arts lesson was taken part in by most of female.

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Writing Feedback / The information about the number of people who used television for sports in different countries. [4]

Television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions

The table below gives information about the number of people who used television for sports in different countries.
It is clear that the figure for tennis in 4 different countries was the highest, the opposite was true for Athletics. It is remarkable that the number of USA citizens viewing TV for sports was higher than the other countries.

Looking at 2 leading sports, tennis and golf, both of them was the most watched by most of people in all 4 sports. While the number of inhabitants in 4 countries watching tennis was nearly the same height from 6 to 7 million people, the opposite was true for golf. It is remarkable that the number of USA citizens viewing golf on TV was the highest figure shown on the table, at exactly 11,2 million, by contrast, the figure for the others was under 4,5 million populations.

Meanwhile the number of citizens viewing athletics in 4 specific countries was 16,9 million at about from 3 to 5,5 million people for each of the 4 countries, the figure for motor racing was the lowest number shown on the table, at 12,7 million inhabitants. It is noticeable that UK had the number of watching motor racing was the highest in 4 countries, with 6,4 million, while the figures for Australia, USA and Canada were only 3,7; 1,5; 1,1 million respectively.

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