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Mev-corona virus

Mev-corona is such a pandemic emergency now . I agree with it
Mev -corona is old virus but rating of tranmission virus fast expanding . The rises of virus is dramatically go up which causes instand death
Virus was first defined at A.S in 2012 caused the viral respiratory disease . Normally it's symptoms include fever , cough and shortness breath as the same as flu . However the different between the disease and the another types flu that starts 1 day and up 7 days . Otherwise the new pandemic due to faster die than normal flu . The new virus has been discovered in Wuhan , China spread quickly aroung the world . Right now, the confirmed cases inflected around the world are more than 70.000 cases and the confirmed deaths are over 1200 humans . The virus spreads from person to person by these droplets of an infected person . The pandemic is very dangerous now but some peoples not to afraid about it because we have several protection which is advised by WHO . Fristly , you can wash your hand at least 20 minutes before eating and after coughing or sneezing . Avoid going to the crowned places and covering your face by mask

Although the pandemic is dangerous but we have more basicly steps to protect ourselves to the virus

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