Writing Feedback / PRACTICING ielts for task 1 consumption for different meat and fish. [NEW]

variety of livestock and fish consumption

The line graph give information about a variety of livestock and fish that people in Europe consume from 1979 to 2004.As can be seen from the figure, there are different consumption for different meat and fish.

At the glance of data demonstrates that there was a dramatic increase in number of chicken by European over 25 year period.In contrast to chicken ,it is noticeable that the lamb and beef declined between 1979 and 2004.

The consumption of chicken was approximately 150 grams in 1979, than skyrocketed to 250 in the year of 2004. Although the beef was the most popular of these food ,with about 100 grams, increasing at the beginning. It is rapidly about 100 grams in 1986.

It is obvious that from the data that the lamp full down steadily from 150 grams to 60 over 25 year period. It is interesting to note that fish was remain stable about 60 grams for per person per week.

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Writing Feedback / The pipe chart give information about electricity energy [3]

The way the electricity energy is utilized

The pipe chart give information about how different electricity energy utilized in two countries in the years 1980 and 2000.

To summary,it is interesting to note that the total production was almost increase twofold from 1980 to 2000. As can be seen from the chart, at the beginning of the period coal made the lowest contribution in Australia , maintaining first place in 2000.In contrast,it is noticeable that the nuclear power do not play a critical role in 1980, but it was the most significant if the electricity energy in France in the year of 2000.

In Australia,the production of coal was 50 units in 1980 and had a drastic growth of 80 units in 2000.On the contrast , at the beginning to the period ,natural gas and oil up 20 units and 10 units respectively,and these charts decline to both 2 unit in 2000.

It is clear from the charts that natural gas increased from 15 units to 126 over the 20 year period in France .In 1980, the natural gas and hydro power were 25 units and 5 units respectively and decreased by 13 units and 3 units after the 20 year period.