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Mar 23, 2020
Writing Feedback / The production level of main fuels in a European country [2]
Hello guys, I am a newbie here and standing in the first step for IELTS. Please help me check my essay. Thanks a lot.
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The line chart depicts fuel production in an unnamed European country in the last two decades of the 20th century.
Overall, petroleum dominated in the amount of mix fuel throughout the survey. Coal production dwindled noticeably, while natural gas increase after a long time of stagnation.
In the 80s, producing coal experiences a downward trend after a peak of 80 tons. In 1988 particularly, it decreased in half (around 50 tons). However, natural gas production still maintained constantly at 40tons. Producing petroleum witnessed 30% rise at the beginning, afterward maintaining this level in a few years
Since 1990, petroleum production had dropped to the original level (about 100 tons) in 1992 and then recovered significantly to 130 tons in 1996 before falling again. Conversely, coal production dipped slightly and reach a new low at 43tons in 2000. By contrast, natural gas production hit the highest new record (approximately 85 tons) in the end of the survey.
(156 words)
Hello guys, I am a newbie here and standing in the first step for IELTS. Please help me check my essay. Thanks a lot.
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The production level of main fuels in a European country
The line chart depicts fuel production in an unnamed European country in the last two decades of the 20th century.
Overall, petroleum dominated in the amount of mix fuel throughout the survey. Coal production dwindled noticeably, while natural gas increase after a long time of stagnation.
In the 80s, producing coal experiences a downward trend after a peak of 80 tons. In 1988 particularly, it decreased in half (around 50 tons). However, natural gas production still maintained constantly at 40tons. Producing petroleum witnessed 30% rise at the beginning, afterward maintaining this level in a few years
Since 1990, petroleum production had dropped to the original level (about 100 tons) in 1992 and then recovered significantly to 130 tons in 1996 before falling again. Conversely, coal production dipped slightly and reach a new low at 43tons in 2000. By contrast, natural gas production hit the highest new record (approximately 85 tons) in the end of the survey.
(156 words)
