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Apr 16, 2020
Writing Feedback / Ielts task 2 " Art can be made by everyone or with those with special ability" [2]
Kindly assess my essay by giving a band. my score target is 6.5
Some people say that art (eg. Painting, music, poetry, etc...) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the most controversial issues among people relates to practise of art. while some people consider that making art is a speciality, others take the view that everyone is able to carry out a certain number of art. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that by making art, they can find pleasure and practise a hobby. Many people choose playing sport, doing music or writing poetry because this allows them to enjoy their spare time although they are not professionals. One good illustration of this is painting our bedroom or apartment by ourselves can positively affect our mood which will provide us a sense of achievement. It is also possible to say that practising art is a manner to reach mental balance.
On the other hand it is also possible to argue that in fact art has compulsorily to be made by those with high ability and capacity. People often have this opinion because art like : sport, painting and poetry are considered as professions and specialities that require perfection when exercising. In order to get a groundbreaking painting or an original peotry, most of people trust in reliable professionals.
As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question, on balance however, I tend to believe that everyone is allowed to practise the kind of art he likes since this permits him to follow his passion and makes him feel comfortable.
'Born' artist or the one who learned the arts
Kindly assess my essay by giving a band. my score target is 6.5
Some people say that art (eg. Painting, music, poetry, etc...) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
One of the most controversial issues among people relates to practise of art. while some people consider that making art is a speciality, others take the view that everyone is able to carry out a certain number of art. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that by making art, they can find pleasure and practise a hobby. Many people choose playing sport, doing music or writing poetry because this allows them to enjoy their spare time although they are not professionals. One good illustration of this is painting our bedroom or apartment by ourselves can positively affect our mood which will provide us a sense of achievement. It is also possible to say that practising art is a manner to reach mental balance.
On the other hand it is also possible to argue that in fact art has compulsorily to be made by those with high ability and capacity. People often have this opinion because art like : sport, painting and poetry are considered as professions and specialities that require perfection when exercising. In order to get a groundbreaking painting or an original peotry, most of people trust in reliable professionals.
As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question, on balance however, I tend to believe that everyone is allowed to practise the kind of art he likes since this permits him to follow his passion and makes him feel comfortable.
