Posts by danh9616

danh9616

Apr 18, 2020

Writing Feedback / Ielts General Writing Task 1: Making a complain on not charging phone cable [3]

@Holt
Hi, thank you very much for your feedback which is so useful to improve my writing.
I would like to update the requirement from task 1:
You have recently bought a piece of electronics which does not work well. Write a letter to the manager of the shop and describe the problem.

In your letter, include what you have done about it and suggest what action you'd like them to take.

P/S: I will follow your advice starting from forming a good sentence before writing an essay!

Thanks again for your help!

danh9616

Apr 18, 2020

Writing Feedback / Ielts General Writing Task 1: Making a complain on not charging phone cable [3]

the i-phone cable doesn't work

Dear Sir,

My name is Harry who was one of the customers coming your Myer store in Chatswood in two weeks before. I bought the i-phone cable charge but it doesn't work when I come back home and use it.

Today I want to write this letter to you to describe the issue of your product. There is not any sign of the power charging on my phone when I put the cable charger to my phone and I think it does not work although I try to put it in and out many times. Therefore, I wonder that you can exchange another cable charger which was tested to work well or you can refund for me as an additional plan.

I hope you can help me to address this unexpected situation in the case that I am a regular client of your shop. Thanks for your help and I hope your business will develop more and more in the future!

Your faithfully,
Harry