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May 14, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS 9 wiriting task 1 : maps of an island before and after constructed [2]
Task 1
The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summerise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My essay：
The maps of theisland compare the differences between with or without the tourist facilities.
It is clear that after the construction, there are not just trees anymore but with houses, roads, pier and so on.
Besides these actual facilities, on the map we can see there are activities design based on the nature resources, such as boat, beach and swimming area.
Thought it become much crowded on the island, there's still spaces remain undeveloped.
It's obvious that all the places for tourist are gathering in the same area.
This would make it easier to other destination, and it wouldn't bother too much time and traffic tools to make it.
Analysis of the provided maps
Task 1
The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summerise the information by selection and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My essay：
The maps of theisland compare the differences between with or without the tourist facilities.
It is clear that after the construction, there are not just trees anymore but with houses, roads, pier and so on.
Besides these actual facilities, on the map we can see there are activities design based on the nature resources, such as boat, beach and swimming area.
Thought it become much crowded on the island, there's still spaces remain undeveloped.
It's obvious that all the places for tourist are gathering in the same area.
This would make it easier to other destination, and it wouldn't bother too much time and traffic tools to make it.
