Writing Feedback / IELTS Writing Task 1 - money paid for books. (France, Italy, Germany, Austria,) [5]

Spendings on books in some European countries

Answer:

The line graph compares the amount of money that people come from four separate countries paid for books in the period of 10 years from 1995 to 2005.

As can be seen from the chart, the year 1999 witnessed a steady increase by 10 million dollars of Germany and Austria and 5 million dollars of the figure of France, with the exception of Italy. From 1999, while only Germany changed direction to downwards trend before hit the highest point of 91 million dollars in 2005, Italy saw a recovery back and reached the peak at the point of approximately 61 million dollars at the end of the period.

The sequence of changes of France and Austria were by far positive. While France experienced a moderate going up until the end of the period, the figure of Austria remained at 40 million dollars for a year and then rocketed to 71 million dollars in 2005 before exceed Italy's in 2003.

In summary, remarkable changes of the paying for books of German, French and Austrian were seen during the period with the acceleration of Austrian's. Otherwise, the figure of Italy was more stable increase then the others.

(196 words- 22 minutes).

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