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May 30, 2020
Writing Feedback / The West Park Secondary School after the first construction in 1950 and development in 2010 [3]

Analysis of the maps essay



The three given maps illustrate the changes of West Park Secondary School's construction during the period since 1950, through 1980 to 2010.

Overall, there is a range of kinds of facilities having been done around the school. Sports field, car park and science block were highlights.

According to the first construction in 1950, the space was divided into 4 main parts: school and playground which were located near a farmland and a row of houses. After 30 years, it was seen a new car park and science block built as the replacement of the old houses. The previous farmland was reconstructed into sport field, so that students could try various sports here.

In 2010, there was no change in the science block and the school main building. However, the extent of playround and sport field was narrowed as the result of the car park area's expansion. The sport fields was even reduced by about 3 times. Although adults found it easier to park, students would feel uncomfortable in practising and playing in a small space.
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