Writing Feedback / Essay about foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for attraction - IELTS task 2 [3]

Hi, @Smile12_12.

I'm not sure if I am capable enough to review your essay, but I can answer your question regarding the differences of "what extent do you agree or disagree" and "do you agree or disagree".

"Do you agree or disagree with the given viewpoint" question means that the discussion would like you to discuss the essay based only on one opinion, supported by various facts, popular knowledge, or personal experience. The proper response to the prompt can only be one of two things; "I agree" or "I disagree". One can never discuss both sides as there is no option in the original prompt that indicates a comparison statements such as "Discuss both points of view."

But if the question ask for what extent do you agree/disagree like your essay did, a good way to answer this question is:
To a certain extent I agree/disagree that... However, I also think that...
By saying that you agree/disagree to a certain extent (not completely), you can now talk about both sides of the argument.

Hope this helps you! :)