Kimdung
Jun 10, 2020
Writing Feedback / Comparative between house and dormitory. [3]
Students at universities of ten have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live at home with their parents. There are some differences between dormitory and house such as living expenses, private space, social relationship and the distance to shcool. One noticeable difference between the two places is living expenses. Living in dormitory will have a lot of expenses for example, rent, electricity, water, internet bills can put a ton of financial strain on students. Some students have to work part-time jobs to afford those expenses. In contrast, living with parents at home, students do not need to worry much about living expenses because their parents can help them. Besides, living in dormitory can take away private space because in a room usually have 4 to 8 people that makes it difficult for students to concentrate on studying and resting. It is also impossible to express our voice of points since there are many different opinions in a room. Nevertheless, living in a house is more freedom and privacy. There are no curious eyes from roommates that may bother us.
Students place to live
Students at universities of ten have a choice of places to live. They may choose to live in university dormitories, or they may choose to live at home with their parents. There are some differences between dormitory and house such as living expenses, private space, social relationship and the distance to shcool. One noticeable difference between the two places is living expenses. Living in dormitory will have a lot of expenses for example, rent, electricity, water, internet bills can put a ton of financial strain on students. Some students have to work part-time jobs to afford those expenses. In contrast, living with parents at home, students do not need to worry much about living expenses because their parents can help them. Besides, living in dormitory can take away private space because in a room usually have 4 to 8 people that makes it difficult for students to concentrate on studying and resting. It is also impossible to express our voice of points since there are many different opinions in a room. Nevertheless, living in a house is more freedom and privacy. There are no curious eyes from roommates that may bother us.
