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Name: hsin yun
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Jul 16, 2020
Writing Feedback / I lost my friend - a sad event and what you learn from the event [2]

I lost my friend



I lost my best friend, Jane last summer. Last year, on July first, she called me to accompany her. She said that she was suffered from depression and that she wasn't in a stable emotion. I heard her voice which was panic and helpless. However, I said sorry to her that I couldn't accompany her. At that time, I was all thinking about hanging out with my favorite cousin, Rex.

On the second day of July, I heard sad news about Jane. She committed suicide. I wasn't believed in the news. I thought it was just a joke. I immediately called her mom to make sure it wasn't true.

After I made sure that Jane was really passed away. I burst into cries. If I had come to comfort her that day, she wouldn't end her life. If I gave her more care, she might get through her tough times.

This grieved event teaches me to be more sensitive to our friends and families. Sometimes, a small greeting can warm one's heart, too.
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