lillyM
Sep 7, 2020
Scholarship / A black kid in America - Questbridge Biographical Essay [3]
I like your writing style and your English is excellent. BUT what struck me is your victim-hood. Your have written your own story of great life and achievement, but it has been somewhat weakened by your focusing on your victimhood. How can you feel a victim in America when the most powerful man in the world was a black man selected twice as the US president? You should forget your skin color and befriend some conservative idols / become familiar with people like Candace Owens who achieved great success without falling for the progressive race / skin color hoax.
I like your writing style and your English is excellent. BUT what struck me is your victim-hood. Your have written your own story of great life and achievement, but it has been somewhat weakened by your focusing on your victimhood. How can you feel a victim in America when the most powerful man in the world was a black man selected twice as the US president? You should forget your skin color and befriend some conservative idols / become familiar with people like Candace Owens who achieved great success without falling for the progressive race / skin color hoax.
