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Aug 26, 2020
Writing Feedback / Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives. Do you agree? [4]
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives.
Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
Notes Write about:
1. whether people's appearance is important
2. the price of clothes
3. ........................ (your own idea)
It is said that people's lives nowadays are affected very badly by the fashion industry. I think there are three main reasons that cause this issue, include the importance of people's appearance, the cost of types of clothes, and the materials that are made into clothes.
To start with, it is undeniable that clothes play an important role in forming people's appearance, which makes people take pride in and be more confident in themselves. Therefore, many individuals usually take care of their looks too much in both work and social life like what types of shirts or pants should be worn, or even they criticize someone else just by his or her appearance. They seem to forget everything around them, and they do not realize that clothes just make people more beautiful outside but not inside.
Secondly, earning their living is not easy, but many people have a tendency of fashion, especially they do not care for the price of clothes. This leads to spend too much time and money on buying so many kinds of clothes, even some of them are too expensive and unsuitable for their normal lives.
Lastly, there are a huge variety of clothing stores in the world from a small shop to a famous store. However, people rarely pay much attention to what the clothes are from. In another word, some kinds of clothes are made from wild animal's skin, and even endangered animals. It is illegal and the special wild animals become extinct.
In conclusion, people are suffering from the disastrous effects of the fashion industry because of three causes that are given.
Some people say the fashion industry has a bad effect on people's lives.
Do you agree?
Write an essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view.
Notes Write about:
1. whether people's appearance is important
2. the price of clothes
3. ........................ (your own idea)
It is said that people's lives nowadays are affected very badly by the fashion industry. I think there are three main reasons that cause this issue, include the importance of people's appearance, the cost of types of clothes, and the materials that are made into clothes.
To start with, it is undeniable that clothes play an important role in forming people's appearance, which makes people take pride in and be more confident in themselves. Therefore, many individuals usually take care of their looks too much in both work and social life like what types of shirts or pants should be worn, or even they criticize someone else just by his or her appearance. They seem to forget everything around them, and they do not realize that clothes just make people more beautiful outside but not inside.
Secondly, earning their living is not easy, but many people have a tendency of fashion, especially they do not care for the price of clothes. This leads to spend too much time and money on buying so many kinds of clothes, even some of them are too expensive and unsuitable for their normal lives.
Lastly, there are a huge variety of clothing stores in the world from a small shop to a famous store. However, people rarely pay much attention to what the clothes are from. In another word, some kinds of clothes are made from wild animal's skin, and even endangered animals. It is illegal and the special wild animals become extinct.
In conclusion, people are suffering from the disastrous effects of the fashion industry because of three causes that are given.
