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The chart - sales report

The chart illustrates the sale trends of 3 shopping complexes followed very different patterns over the past year with FinGroup Ltd and Man Ltd on an upward trend and Bluebird Ltd in decline.

For Fin, the year began with sales of 1 million euros, more three times as high as those of Man but they plummeted about 90% and leveled off in next 2 months. By contrast, Man saw a steady increase from 300000 to 900000 through 4 months. May experienced a noticeable recovery at Fin followed by a period of considerable fluctuation with the figures almost around 1,5 million, whereas those of Man fell mildly in May and then rose marginally about 300000 euros till September.For the rest of the year, Fin's sales took a nosedive about 90% before surging hitting the peak in December of nearly 1,7 millions meanwhile Man's ones continued picking up but with sharper level each month and also reached a record high of 16000 in last month.

With regarding to Bluebird, first 4 months observed the erratic changes but all the numbers were the highest in 3 places. Although, the best sales position was not belong to Bluebird for last 7 months. Its monthly takings kept going downhill till reaching the lowest point of over 200000 mark in July and then fluctuated wildly around 400000 until end of the year.