Letters / Write a letter to the person who gave you a great deal of help when you were away. [3]

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The prompt is:
You have just come back from San Fransico. When you were there, your friend Mr.Jack son gave you a great deal of help.

Write to Mr.Jackson to thank him for his hospitality and help

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Dear Mr. Jackson,
I'm writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to give me a great deal of help when I were in San Fransico.
Though we've been close neighbours for many years, this was the first time I had had you done me a favor when I were away. During my stay, you helped me a lots and showed your hospitality that I very appreciated. You were the housekeeper for me , fed to my dogs , watered the garden ... . Without you, I couldn't handle my stuffs well. Therefore, my work in the city had panned out nicely and I also had a wonderful time there.

My wife and I were very much grateful to you for a great deal of help. Please accept my thanks for everything you've done for me. If you need anything in your stuffs, let me know. Again with my thanks for your hospitality.

Yours sincerely,
Quoc Vinh