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Oct 12, 2020
Writing Feedback / Task 1: Information regarding the proportion of people doing volunteer jobs in six different spheres [2]
The visual reveals information regarding the proportion of people doing volunteer jobs in six different spheres and shows how the value alters in two years surveyed, namely 2008 and 2014. Generally, it can be seen that while the environmental sector accounted for the lion's share in the whole chart, the reverse was evident with the health care category in both years.
According to the pie charts, the environment, sport, and health care were characterized by an overall upward trend. Specifically, whereas the sporting categories thrived by 10% in the portion of volunteers during the 6-year gap to finish at 25%, that of the health care sector witnessed an insignificant increase of 1%. Besides, the data of environmental volunteers noticeably grew by 8%, and thus this category still dominated the whole data with 29% in 2014.
Conversely, education and art underwent an opposite tendency in comparison with their counterparts. The most noticeable deflation among this group was the educational figure, decreasing from 24% to merely 17% in 2014, which was followed by that of Art, identically, was recorded a minimal deterioration of 6% to hit 12% in the same period. Meanwhile, the data representing others category, which commenced at 15%, almost halved in the occupation of volunteering members between 2008 and 2014.
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the percentage of volunteers by organizations in 2008 and 2014
The visual reveals information regarding the proportion of people doing volunteer jobs in six different spheres and shows how the value alters in two years surveyed, namely 2008 and 2014. Generally, it can be seen that while the environmental sector accounted for the lion's share in the whole chart, the reverse was evident with the health care category in both years.
According to the pie charts, the environment, sport, and health care were characterized by an overall upward trend. Specifically, whereas the sporting categories thrived by 10% in the portion of volunteers during the 6-year gap to finish at 25%, that of the health care sector witnessed an insignificant increase of 1%. Besides, the data of environmental volunteers noticeably grew by 8%, and thus this category still dominated the whole data with 29% in 2014.
Conversely, education and art underwent an opposite tendency in comparison with their counterparts. The most noticeable deflation among this group was the educational figure, decreasing from 24% to merely 17% in 2014, which was followed by that of Art, identically, was recorded a minimal deterioration of 6% to hit 12% in the same period. Meanwhile, the data representing others category, which commenced at 15%, almost halved in the occupation of volunteering members between 2008 and 2014.
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