Graduate / The intro for my SOP for masters in AI [3]

statement of purpose

Hey Guys,

Could you help me select the intro for my SOP.

'Too many people but none to talk to'. Citing this problem, researchers across the globe have been working on ways to make a machine more empathetic and ethically right so people suffering from mental health can tell their problems without the fear of being judged. This intersection of Human Psychology and Computer Science is called Affective Computing. I explored this phenomenal research field while reading an article from Psychology Today and it ignited my interest in pursuing research in this field. Today as I write this application, I feel immense joy taking a step ahead towards my dream.

or this one

(There I was surfing the web, reading an article from Psychology Today, amazed by how varied emotions this brain of ours is capable of feeling. The amusement was not even over yet when Google customized its feed as per my last searches prompting me to take diagnostic tests for my mental health. Though intrusive, it was enthralling to observe how Artificial Intelligence (AI) could predict my behavioral state and even suggest what I should read next. This observation ignited my interest in pursuing research intersection of - Human Psychology and Artificial intelligence, (Affective Computing) )

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