Writing Feedback / If we want to save the future of the planet, we will have to change our lifestyle. Give your opinion [3]

(Note: i'm practising writing the introduction first so this paragraph just have the introduction)

problems of our planet

These days , our planet is facing with many problems such as global-warming or the disappearance of the ozone layer. Some people argued that the best way to help our planet avoid unwanted result is alter our lifestyle. In my opinion, i completely agree with this idea and in this essay I'll support my opinion with examples.

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