akmolya
Nov 2, 2020
Writing Feedback / IELTS- Task 2: Children should be taught musical instrument [3]
Hi! You have mistakes in spelling, such as humane (must be human) in first sentence. Also better to write to learn to play a musical instrument. From my perspective, I fully support this statement. I think it will be better. Also better to write how to play a musical instrument, rather than just an instrument
Hi! You have mistakes in spelling, such as humane (must be human) in first sentence. Also better to write to learn to play a musical instrument. From my perspective, I fully support this statement. I think it will be better. Also better to write how to play a musical instrument, rather than just an instrument
