nhaianh2208
Nov 5, 2020
Writing Feedback / The percentage of people populated in urban areas in certain parts of the world - IELST task 1. [3]
I think you should divide your essay into paragraphs. In my opinion, ielts writing task 1 can always be divided into 3 paragraphs. Initially, you should write an introduction and overview. Then, your detail ideas will be presented in the next two paragraphs. Another thing to be noticed is you should put your ideas into group in a way that reader can find comparision.
I think you should divide your essay into paragraphs. In my opinion, ielts writing task 1 can always be divided into 3 paragraphs. Initially, you should write an introduction and overview. Then, your detail ideas will be presented in the next two paragraphs. Another thing to be noticed is you should put your ideas into group in a way that reader can find comparision.