Undergraduate / Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum in Engineering field - Education is the key [3]

Hi there! Nice to know you.
Dear @Holt, please excuse me, I'd like to add more feedbacks on this essay.
First of all, I am also Indonesian and applying to this scholarship too this year as well, and I noticed you were using similar word choices and structure to a motivation letter example in the internet which I think was such a misleading. While most scholarship often ask you to be original, not based on other says. Plus, you should not mention that you're having flaws etc, it is unnecessary. The point of the essay was to show why you're the most eligible candidate, while on your last sentence you seem don't have the confidence as the best candidate they'll ever think about.

If you're confused on what to write, please refer to the point mentioned in the application form. It has been very helpful for me to construct my essay :).

If you got confused on the template, you can find one or two references from the awardee and adapt the template with your original words and situations.

You still have some limited times to go, go work on it and good luck for your application! :)