Posts by celeztina [Suspended]

celeztina

Feb 15, 2021

Scholarship / Statement of Purpose; Goal of Study & Study Plan Graduate : Art Management [6]

Hi! Some suggestions for your essay is that I think you should group your essay better (maybe break it down) and explicitly explain in each of these broken down sections your goals and why that matters

celeztina

Feb 12, 2021

Undergraduate / Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay [7]

@remy
Hi Remy, it would be better if you could talk about the events in your life that started to help you gain interest. Remember to relate everything back to yourself and stay on topic!!

celeztina

Feb 12, 2021

Undergraduate / Application Form: Provide any additional information about your High School science and math [2]

extra information about my school

Question: If you would like to provide any additional information about your High School science and mathematics background, you may do so in the space below (maximum of 50 words).

My response: My school offers a Science Olympiad program that allows students to compete in different events. The events that I chose were anatomy/physiology and disease. I placed 3rd in YUSO and 8th out of 110 teams at ATX. I've also reached out to a graduate doctor who attended my school.

I'm not entirely sure what I'm supposed to be responding with in this space but, this is what I came up with. It would be great if anyone could help me out by fixing any grammatical issues or just explaining what would be ideal to respond with here. Thanks!