roy_leung
Mar 5, 2021
Writing Feedback / IELTS General Writing Task 1: Seaside Hotel Booking [2]
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Roy, I am currently planning a Family trip regarding for the South seaside area between 10 - 12 March 2021. As search over the Internet, Seaside hotel would be the one having the highest ranking for selection. I would like to ask for room availability of the above mentioned 2 days.
There is total 3 persons will stay for these 2 days with 2 adults and a 1-year-old baby. I would like to reserve for 1 semi-double bedroom with a baby bed and baby chair. Please help to provide the detail information about this room reservation offer, including the facilities, swimming pool, gym room, restaurant (including menu) and room service at your hotel with the opening hours.
We are looking forward to hearing your reply. We would like to enjoy your hotels professional service at the coming wonderful holiday as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Roy Leung
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Nowadays, in the modern era, there are too many events available to child for their extra-activities. Some active children may affect others in a group to doing the same event or follow their ideas. However, some Parents do not satisfy with this and trying to arrange all activities for their children by their expectation. is it a good and well arrangement?
In current century, internet would provide many ideas for children to explorer the new activities. That is no boundary to limit the information retrieval. No matter in school, classmate may cross sharing their ideas. As many idea exposure, Children and Teenagers may follow the most fashion one for learning and studying.
I would not believe that parents would always be possible to plan the activities to their child as their expect. As there is many new activities, Parents would not always be able to understand those ideas and hobbies. Most likely, Parents would brief study what kind of current popular event of their child doing.
In a globalization environment, activities would be cross cultural. If parents still trying to decide all the activities to their child which do not suitable for them or do not follow their hobbies. It would be slow down their creative mind set and learning explorer. The time wasting may cause their child to eliminate their learning motivation.
By the above assumption, Parents should not be possible to arrange those what their expected event to their children. I do believe parents would only be able to support what their child wants and provide the right direction to them. And possibility to avoid the illegal action which about what the event performing.
Parents would not be possible to decide all event to their child. The better way is to support their child to explorer their hobbies and trying all the new idea during the free time. Also, to avoid any illegal action of any activity would still require parents to make understand what their child working on.
trip for the South seaside area
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Roy, I am currently planning a Family trip regarding for the South seaside area between 10 - 12 March 2021. As search over the Internet, Seaside hotel would be the one having the highest ranking for selection. I would like to ask for room availability of the above mentioned 2 days.
There is total 3 persons will stay for these 2 days with 2 adults and a 1-year-old baby. I would like to reserve for 1 semi-double bedroom with a baby bed and baby chair. Please help to provide the detail information about this room reservation offer, including the facilities, swimming pool, gym room, restaurant (including menu) and room service at your hotel with the opening hours.
We are looking forward to hearing your reply. We would like to enjoy your hotels professional service at the coming wonderful holiday as soon as possible.
Yours Sincerely,
Roy Leung
#####################################################
Nowadays, in the modern era, there are too many events available to child for their extra-activities. Some active children may affect others in a group to doing the same event or follow their ideas. However, some Parents do not satisfy with this and trying to arrange all activities for their children by their expectation. is it a good and well arrangement?
In current century, internet would provide many ideas for children to explorer the new activities. That is no boundary to limit the information retrieval. No matter in school, classmate may cross sharing their ideas. As many idea exposure, Children and Teenagers may follow the most fashion one for learning and studying.
I would not believe that parents would always be possible to plan the activities to their child as their expect. As there is many new activities, Parents would not always be able to understand those ideas and hobbies. Most likely, Parents would brief study what kind of current popular event of their child doing.
In a globalization environment, activities would be cross cultural. If parents still trying to decide all the activities to their child which do not suitable for them or do not follow their hobbies. It would be slow down their creative mind set and learning explorer. The time wasting may cause their child to eliminate their learning motivation.
By the above assumption, Parents should not be possible to arrange those what their expected event to their children. I do believe parents would only be able to support what their child wants and provide the right direction to them. And possibility to avoid the illegal action which about what the event performing.
Parents would not be possible to decide all event to their child. The better way is to support their child to explorer their hobbies and trying all the new idea during the free time. Also, to avoid any illegal action of any activity would still require parents to make understand what their child working on.