peter4904
Mar 21, 2021
Writing Feedback / Writing task 1 - Safety condition of endangered plants and their different living places [2]
Question:
Summerize the info by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My answer:
The pie chart illustrates different safety conditions of thretened species, while the bar chart indicates data about various living places of those. In summary, most endangered plants are under protection and popularly found in tropical wet forest.
To commerce with, the proportion of protected plants is highest, at 64,10%, followed by 20,44% species with shortage of data, which is approximately 3 times less than the uppermost. The vunerable, endangered and critically endangerd plants are quite negligible, at 6,92%; 3,92% and 4,62% respectively.
Turning to the pie chart, it can be easily seen that the most favourite habitat of vegitation which facing extiction is tropical wet forest, at exactly 63% and overwhelms other environments. Harder-to-found species in tropical wet forest, dry savana, tropical dry grass land occupy 12,1%; 7,7% and 4,5% in order. Least popular choices for plants experiencing itimidation to live on are wetlands, tropical wet grassland and desert with only under 4,3% each.
P/s: Could anyone point out some mistakes that often made in part 1, as I often receive only 5.5-6 for my task? Thanks a lot!
Question:
The charts below give info about endangered plants around the world.
Summerize the info by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My answer:
The pie chart illustrates different safety conditions of thretened species, while the bar chart indicates data about various living places of those. In summary, most endangered plants are under protection and popularly found in tropical wet forest.
To commerce with, the proportion of protected plants is highest, at 64,10%, followed by 20,44% species with shortage of data, which is approximately 3 times less than the uppermost. The vunerable, endangered and critically endangerd plants are quite negligible, at 6,92%; 3,92% and 4,62% respectively.
Turning to the pie chart, it can be easily seen that the most favourite habitat of vegitation which facing extiction is tropical wet forest, at exactly 63% and overwhelms other environments. Harder-to-found species in tropical wet forest, dry savana, tropical dry grass land occupy 12,1%; 7,7% and 4,5% in order. Least popular choices for plants experiencing itimidation to live on are wetlands, tropical wet grassland and desert with only under 4,3% each.
P/s: Could anyone point out some mistakes that often made in part 1, as I often receive only 5.5-6 for my task? Thanks a lot!
