Essays / A 10-page essay on foster care contributes to youth delinquency [3]

I'm in my 2nd year of university and would like to write better essays, but my thought always gets so scrambled with my chosen topics. To make my argument re the above topic, I was thinking of writing in this order:

- Stats of crime rate committed by youth who has been in foster care
- History of CAS and its power
- How an apprehension order is written, how it is executed and on what basis it is issued
- What type of effects foster care has on youth
- Why youth become criminal after care
- What happens to youth when they are 'aged out' from care
- The corruption of CAS, the attitude of the directors especially when a child is wrongfully removed

Any help is much appreciated.