Thanh Dat
May 15, 2021
Writing Feedback / Task2: In the present time in some nations, ownership of a house is more important than renting [2]
In the present time in some nations, ownership of a house is more important than renting. My from of view, I reckon this comment above is a negative case to notions discussed further in this essay.
Firstly, purchasing a home in some countries is extremely expensive resulted not suitable for a good number of people. Most of the well-paid, promising jobs or manual work have been located in cities, center industry especially in massive cities. In addition, those places are plenty of people who live in surrounding countryside move up cities finding suitable themselves work. Besides, inhabitation needs daily activities after working time, nevertheless, purchasing a home in big cities is difficult for the poor and under the middle class Because it requires a large amount of money. Instead renting the house is flexible and more convenient. Rental house fees are impossible with an underpaid and to pay for some filed such as take care of a family or advanced heath. For example, Singapore is a part of countries in Southeast Asia that is the most expensive about the standard of life. furthermore, the house produces which move up tens of thousands dollar.
Secondly, a large amount of money is used to buy a home that can divide into many parts to service for several different goals. Each person in the community has their dreams or targets. Using all of your money buying a house that could make people give up passion. For instance, some young generations have some hope for going study abroad or traveling on the world with way use a part of savings and the rest for accommodation. Sharing the money into sections allows people to no spin out of control in life. In addition, decreasing under pressure for the problem has to have a house.
All things considered, be the owner of the accommodation could not probably be suitable for many people, especially in low class in society. Next, the cost for purchasing a house is massively and divided the money into paying for some different things such as hobbies or heath
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people
In the present time in some nations, ownership of a house is more important than renting. My from of view, I reckon this comment above is a negative case to notions discussed further in this essay.
Firstly, purchasing a home in some countries is extremely expensive resulted not suitable for a good number of people. Most of the well-paid, promising jobs or manual work have been located in cities, center industry especially in massive cities. In addition, those places are plenty of people who live in surrounding countryside move up cities finding suitable themselves work. Besides, inhabitation needs daily activities after working time, nevertheless, purchasing a home in big cities is difficult for the poor and under the middle class Because it requires a large amount of money. Instead renting the house is flexible and more convenient. Rental house fees are impossible with an underpaid and to pay for some filed such as take care of a family or advanced heath. For example, Singapore is a part of countries in Southeast Asia that is the most expensive about the standard of life. furthermore, the house produces which move up tens of thousands dollar.
Secondly, a large amount of money is used to buy a home that can divide into many parts to service for several different goals. Each person in the community has their dreams or targets. Using all of your money buying a house that could make people give up passion. For instance, some young generations have some hope for going study abroad or traveling on the world with way use a part of savings and the rest for accommodation. Sharing the money into sections allows people to no spin out of control in life. In addition, decreasing under pressure for the problem has to have a house.
All things considered, be the owner of the accommodation could not probably be suitable for many people, especially in low class in society. Next, the cost for purchasing a house is massively and divided the money into paying for some different things such as hobbies or heath
