tuitenkhoi2005
May 16, 2021
Undergraduate / Write about an unforgettable experience in your life. Could you give me comments on my paragraph? [6]
I just turned to 16 years old last April, it means that I've been living for 16 years. Honestly, there were many unforgettable experiences throughout, I suppose one of them, which popped into my mind initially when i first saw this topic, was the first time, i had ever struck up with my dj controlle. To me It was an indescribable experience. No words could convey my feelings and my thoughts that day, though I'll try to simplify it. Off the top of my head, it took place on Saturday. It was an ordinary day . Everything just happened the way it is supposed to be. But deep inside myself there was sth that palpitated, looked forward to, excited. The day before , I decided for no reasons to choose that saturday.I don't know how could i slept very well in that night, whereas woke up feeling worried the day after, That day seemed to me elapsed really slow. Finally it was about time to perform. There were 7 people who attended the party. They were all my friends. They were so excited and looking forward to the performance. My performance wouldn't be flawless without the help of my friend Kim. She and I prepared well to please the attendance by adjusting my room a little bit, moved 2 desks together and hid a ton of mess behind the curtains. I also borrowed Kim's speaker and a room light. I got my performance prepared by connecting the speaker with my laptop and having the light set up. It was terrific and gorgeous. The vibe was insane. It blew everybody's mind. Before I started performing, I asked my friends to go out and justified myself with only a reason for that I still had something to prepare for. Actually the perfume and put on hair wax. I was already pleased with the sight in front of my eyes. Meanwhile I also felt extremely anxious, palpitated with fair and trembled with anxiety. Despite of having so many eyes on me. I tried to call deep on my courage and pressed the start button at once. The first minutes really put me under pressure. Until everybody started to feel and sing along with the music, I was relieved. I also heard some whispering compliments from the audience. At that moment, I knew that I succeeded and I would continue to do this again. Although I made a couple of mistakes in my performance, I had a feeling that the perfect output sound from the speaker Marshall and the bar lights really compensated for my mistakes. That night ended up wonderful for me and I slept quite deep that night.
Dj controller
I just turned to 16 years old last April, it means that I've been living for 16 years. Honestly, there were many unforgettable experiences throughout, I suppose one of them, which popped into my mind initially when i first saw this topic, was the first time, i had ever struck up with my dj controlle. To me It was an indescribable experience. No words could convey my feelings and my thoughts that day, though I'll try to simplify it. Off the top of my head, it took place on Saturday. It was an ordinary day . Everything just happened the way it is supposed to be. But deep inside myself there was sth that palpitated, looked forward to, excited. The day before , I decided for no reasons to choose that saturday.I don't know how could i slept very well in that night, whereas woke up feeling worried the day after, That day seemed to me elapsed really slow. Finally it was about time to perform. There were 7 people who attended the party. They were all my friends. They were so excited and looking forward to the performance. My performance wouldn't be flawless without the help of my friend Kim. She and I prepared well to please the attendance by adjusting my room a little bit, moved 2 desks together and hid a ton of mess behind the curtains. I also borrowed Kim's speaker and a room light. I got my performance prepared by connecting the speaker with my laptop and having the light set up. It was terrific and gorgeous. The vibe was insane. It blew everybody's mind. Before I started performing, I asked my friends to go out and justified myself with only a reason for that I still had something to prepare for. Actually the perfume and put on hair wax. I was already pleased with the sight in front of my eyes. Meanwhile I also felt extremely anxious, palpitated with fair and trembled with anxiety. Despite of having so many eyes on me. I tried to call deep on my courage and pressed the start button at once. The first minutes really put me under pressure. Until everybody started to feel and sing along with the music, I was relieved. I also heard some whispering compliments from the audience. At that moment, I knew that I succeeded and I would continue to do this again. Although I made a couple of mistakes in my performance, I had a feeling that the perfect output sound from the speaker Marshall and the bar lights really compensated for my mistakes. That night ended up wonderful for me and I slept quite deep that night.
