hoa nguyen
Jul 27, 2021
Writing Feedback / Exploiting remote natural locations for tourism [3]
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hoa nguyen
Jun 30, 2021
Writing Feedback / The maps show some changes on the island without and with the development of new infrastructures [3]
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hoa nguyen
Jun 29, 2021
Writing Feedback / The maps show some changes on the island without and with the development of new infrastructures [3]
IELTS 1 Topic:
Summerise some information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My essay:
The maps illustrate some changes on the island without and with the development of new infrastructures.
Overall, the island experienced considerable changes during the period. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are that the second one is equipped full of tourism purposes.
As can be seen from the maps, the first map shows nothing on the island except some trees and a beach in the west, but the second map illustrates the changes after constructing facilities. Two areas of accommodation have been built to both the east and west of the island. Besides, each footpath is connected with western accommodation units and leads to the beach. Furthermore, on the first map visitors can not able to swim, but on the second map, a swimming facility is available.
Turning to the other features, we can see that there is a restaurant in the north of the island and a central reception block is surrounded by the vehicle track. This track runs through the reception from the north to south to lead a pier where tourists can go sailing.
IELTS 1 Topic:
The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summerise some information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My essay:
The maps illustrate some changes on the island without and with the development of new infrastructures.
Overall, the island experienced considerable changes during the period. The most noticeable differences between the two maps are that the second one is equipped full of tourism purposes.
As can be seen from the maps, the first map shows nothing on the island except some trees and a beach in the west, but the second map illustrates the changes after constructing facilities. Two areas of accommodation have been built to both the east and west of the island. Besides, each footpath is connected with western accommodation units and leads to the beach. Furthermore, on the first map visitors can not able to swim, but on the second map, a swimming facility is available.
Turning to the other features, we can see that there is a restaurant in the north of the island and a central reception block is surrounded by the vehicle track. This track runs through the reception from the north to south to lead a pier where tourists can go sailing.
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