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Name: Bùi Ngọc Huyền
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Jul 2, 2021
Writing Feedback / A large number of teens nowadays choose to stay at home and communicate with their pals online [2]

many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person



It is simple to notice that a large number of teens nowadays choose to stay at home and communicate with their pals online. There are several causes for this trend, in my opinion, but I believe it is mostly due to societal evolution. However, I am convinced that a variety of measures may be taken into account in order to substantially avoid Internet addiction.

To begin with, the social landscape has shifted drastically. As a result, various electronic gadgets were presented to the public, and several online social platforms, such as Facebook and Twitter, were established. People may readily communicate with those who live far away. As a result, kids will be able to make acquaintances with a large number of individuals from all over the world. Teenagers have more freedom of expression in social media without any protestion. Furthermore, these online platforms generally offer user-friendly interfaces and appealing features. Instagram, for example, provides a plethora of filters that allow users to enhance their look without using make-up.

As someone who knows a lot of kids who are addicted to online socializing, I believe there are some options to explore. First and foremost, I believe that schools should try to organize more outside activities aim to actively encourage students to interact with their peers. Furthermore, the government should enact rules allowing individuals to use social media for a limited period of time.

I am certain that this is not a beneficial trend since individuals may lose a significant portion of their genuine relationships. To promote awareness, each person should be informed about the drawbacks of excessive use of social media.
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