Scholarship / Academic objectives which lead to long-range goals; producing accessible and satisfactory videogames [3]

I am applying for a scholarship at university. I'd like to receive suggestions and helpful advice about my essay draft.

Describe your academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals

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Please include specifically how a Bachelor's degree from the University of (..) will contribute to your achieving your longer-range goals. (100-word maximum)

Having a passion for programming made me create interactive games at high school. As a gamer lover, I am looking forward to producing accessible and satisfactory videogames with the intention of making the technology more inclusive. Since the interest in innovation of your university, I believe being a student of Computer Science at the University of Toronto will help me develop concrete scientific knowledge, as well as provide better opportunities in the technology industry. With this academic structure, I will be able to achieve my long-term goals of democratizing access to electronic games.