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Jan 19, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS 1: The proportion of passing the driving test between males and females in one Asian country [6]
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Jan 11, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS 1: The proportion of passing the driving test between males and females in one Asian country [6]
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Jan 10, 2022
Writing Feedback / IELTS 1: The proportion of passing the driving test between males and females in one Asian country [6]
The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The bar chart compares the proportion of passing the driving test between male and female in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
From 1980 to 2010, The rate of women passing the exam was higher than men. In 1980, the percentage of men who was succeed in their driving test was just under a third while women' rate was nearly half. Even though the proportion of both male and female increased through time (from 1980 to 2000), the rate of passing the driving test from women was much higher, particularly in 2000 accounting for almost 70 percent. In 2010, the successful rate of people passing the exam in two gender changed negatively. For instance, the rate of success from female diminished slightly about 2 or 3 percent while the male' rate stayed remain.
In conclusion, through time, the trend of the percentage of taking the driving test successfully from male and female in this Asian country has positively increase, particularly in women.
Driving test pass rates
The chart shows the percentage of women and men in one Asian country who passed when they took their driving test between 1980 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Below is my work, It would be great if you could take a look and give us some recommendations. Thank you so much for your time
The bar chart compares the proportion of passing the driving test between male and female in one Asian country from 1980 to 2010.
From 1980 to 2010, The rate of women passing the exam was higher than men. In 1980, the percentage of men who was succeed in their driving test was just under a third while women' rate was nearly half. Even though the proportion of both male and female increased through time (from 1980 to 2000), the rate of passing the driving test from women was much higher, particularly in 2000 accounting for almost 70 percent. In 2010, the successful rate of people passing the exam in two gender changed negatively. For instance, the rate of success from female diminished slightly about 2 or 3 percent while the male' rate stayed remain.
In conclusion, through time, the trend of the percentage of taking the driving test successfully from male and female in this Asian country has positively increase, particularly in women.
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