zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Undergraduate / Singapore food - Your roommate to be - Stanford Roomate Essay [7]
Oh okay thanks so much for the analysis!
Oh okay thanks so much for the analysis!
zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Undergraduate / Chinese Chess - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay. Currently overlength )): [3]
Hey Guys!
This is my stanford essay for intellectual vitality. Do you think it actually shows intellectual vitality, or would a more academic piece be better.
And oh, its over length by about 400 chars out of 1800 :X
Thanks everyone! ((:
I used to tutor needy children, especially those weak in Math. Tutoring someone 3 years younger didn't turn out to be the no-brainer I thought it was. In fact, it was rather intellectually challenging.
I had a 15 year old kid under me called Gary who posed a great challenge to me. He was known as the hopeless case by other social workers, for he responded to neither the carrot nor the stick. Sure enough, no matter how I tried to be strict or tried to bribe him with small presents, he just wouldn't listen! However, he was pretty intelligent. I saw his potential, and I wanted to help him fulfill it.
From interacting with his friends and personal observation, I found that he was interested and highly proficient in Chinese Chess. Thus, I decided to act using that bit of information - I started playing chess with him after every session. Predictably, he was very excited by that prospect, especially by the fact that he could beat me so easily when I was supposed to be smarter. Gradually, the distance between us narrowed; he started to feel that I wasn't so different from him after all, and began to have faith in his own ability.
Now that he was hooked, I moved on to the next stage of my plan; which was to use chess as a carrot to make him study. I told him that I would set him 5 sets of problems every session, and that for every set he solved, I would have a game with him. He declined at first, but after a few days his love for the game won out, and he begrudgingly agreed.
I started him off with easy questions to build his confidence. Sometimes I even hinted using similar questions so that he would not be put off by his inability to do a single question. He progressed rapidly. My questions increased in difficulty, yet he required ever fewer hints. By the end of half a year, his grades had improved dramatically from the bottom 3 of his class to average, and his interest in Math grew. The last saw him, he told me proudly that he was now ranked the 5th in Math. We rejoiced.
Gary wasn't the only person who learnt something. I learned too. The whole experience has made me realize that there are always many solutions to a problem, and that we should always be on the lookout of new and innovative solutions.
Hey Guys!
This is my stanford essay for intellectual vitality. Do you think it actually shows intellectual vitality, or would a more academic piece be better.
And oh, its over length by about 400 chars out of 1800 :X
Thanks everyone! ((:
I used to tutor needy children, especially those weak in Math. Tutoring someone 3 years younger didn't turn out to be the no-brainer I thought it was. In fact, it was rather intellectually challenging.
I had a 15 year old kid under me called Gary who posed a great challenge to me. He was known as the hopeless case by other social workers, for he responded to neither the carrot nor the stick. Sure enough, no matter how I tried to be strict or tried to bribe him with small presents, he just wouldn't listen! However, he was pretty intelligent. I saw his potential, and I wanted to help him fulfill it.
From interacting with his friends and personal observation, I found that he was interested and highly proficient in Chinese Chess. Thus, I decided to act using that bit of information - I started playing chess with him after every session. Predictably, he was very excited by that prospect, especially by the fact that he could beat me so easily when I was supposed to be smarter. Gradually, the distance between us narrowed; he started to feel that I wasn't so different from him after all, and began to have faith in his own ability.
Now that he was hooked, I moved on to the next stage of my plan; which was to use chess as a carrot to make him study. I told him that I would set him 5 sets of problems every session, and that for every set he solved, I would have a game with him. He declined at first, but after a few days his love for the game won out, and he begrudgingly agreed.
I started him off with easy questions to build his confidence. Sometimes I even hinted using similar questions so that he would not be put off by his inability to do a single question. He progressed rapidly. My questions increased in difficulty, yet he required ever fewer hints. By the end of half a year, his grades had improved dramatically from the bottom 3 of his class to average, and his interest in Math grew. The last saw him, he told me proudly that he was now ranked the 5th in Math. We rejoiced.
Gary wasn't the only person who learnt something. I learned too. The whole experience has made me realize that there are always many solutions to a problem, and that we should always be on the lookout of new and innovative solutions.
zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Student Talk / Exam passing tips - its my final year [71]
Heyy, for me what works is that I leave the content heavy subjects till the very end, like those with a lot of memory work such as biology and do the math and physics first. You dont forget the theory of how to do questions that fast, but information is forgotten more easily, so it might be useful to leave the info heavy ones till later and cram in short term memory
Good luck! I'm taking As too so thats what im doing
Heyy, for me what works is that I leave the content heavy subjects till the very end, like those with a lot of memory work such as biology and do the math and physics first. You dont forget the theory of how to do questions that fast, but information is forgotten more easily, so it might be useful to leave the info heavy ones till later and cram in short term memory
Good luck! I'm taking As too so thats what im doing
zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Student Talk / Do SAT scores really count? [63]
Yep, schools generally weigh quite heavily on the SAT, but if your usual results are good and consistently good, I think they will be more inclined to take your usual results as a more accurate assessment of your ability.
I think you can still register for last minute retakes. Why not do that, the RD ends 1Jan anyway! Goodluck!
Yep, schools generally weigh quite heavily on the SAT, but if your usual results are good and consistently good, I think they will be more inclined to take your usual results as a more accurate assessment of your ability.
I think you can still register for last minute retakes. Why not do that, the RD ends 1Jan anyway! Goodluck!
zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Undergraduate / Singapore food - Your roommate to be - Stanford Roomate Essay [7]
Thanks for the compliment! (:
Any negative comments would be greatly appreciated as well, helps me work my essay better.
Thanks for the compliment! (:
Any negative comments would be greatly appreciated as well, helps me work my essay better.
zhangyitao
Nov 1, 2009
Undergraduate / Singapore food - Your roommate to be - Stanford Roomate Essay [7]
Dear Roomate!
I'm Zhang Yi Tao, your roommate to be! I'm really excited about going to Stanford, but at the same time I feel a twinge of curiosity and anxiety on what university life will hold in store for me, and what kind of person my roommate will be. I suppose you feel the same, so let me introduce myself and allay your anxiety.
Well I'm a pretty normal guy, no major bad habits except sleeping in really late on Sunday mornings. I'm amicable and jovial, and like to make friends. Coming from multi-racial Singapore, I have friends from all kinds of races, religion and sexual orientations, so I'm sure we'll get along just fine. I'm not religious myself, so I don't have any taboo topics or food, and you don't have to worry about offending me!
I'm a rather talkative person, and I enjoy debating ideas and concepts learnt in school because it exposes me to refreshing viewpoints and I seem to remember ideas better after thrashing them out with others. I hope you don't mistake me as an overly competitive person as a result of that, it is just how I learn and I hope we will have many fruitful discussions in the coming year.
Food and lodging are usually the biggest worries that a freshman has. Well you are in luck, for I cook pretty well. Both my parents worked so I used to cook my own lunch. Over the years I have built up quite a repertoire of local delicacies and given Singapore's status as a food haven, I am sure you will enjoy my cooking!
I hope we will have a great time together and see you soon!
Please do give your kind suggestions! ((:
Dear Roomate!
I'm Zhang Yi Tao, your roommate to be! I'm really excited about going to Stanford, but at the same time I feel a twinge of curiosity and anxiety on what university life will hold in store for me, and what kind of person my roommate will be. I suppose you feel the same, so let me introduce myself and allay your anxiety.
Well I'm a pretty normal guy, no major bad habits except sleeping in really late on Sunday mornings. I'm amicable and jovial, and like to make friends. Coming from multi-racial Singapore, I have friends from all kinds of races, religion and sexual orientations, so I'm sure we'll get along just fine. I'm not religious myself, so I don't have any taboo topics or food, and you don't have to worry about offending me!
I'm a rather talkative person, and I enjoy debating ideas and concepts learnt in school because it exposes me to refreshing viewpoints and I seem to remember ideas better after thrashing them out with others. I hope you don't mistake me as an overly competitive person as a result of that, it is just how I learn and I hope we will have many fruitful discussions in the coming year.
Food and lodging are usually the biggest worries that a freshman has. Well you are in luck, for I cook pretty well. Both my parents worked so I used to cook my own lunch. Over the years I have built up quite a repertoire of local delicacies and given Singapore's status as a food haven, I am sure you will enjoy my cooking!
I hope we will have a great time together and see you soon!
Please do give your kind suggestions! ((:
