caesar23
Jan 30, 2022
Writing Feedback / [IELTS Writing task 1] EU-born Science and Technology employees working in the US in 1999 [5]
@hellogorkha
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caesar23
Jan 27, 2022
Writing Feedback / [IELTS Writing task 1] EU-born Science and Technology employees working in the US in 1999 [5]
@Holt
Thank you kindly!
May I have your recommendations of how to solve my problems mentioned above?
I mean, I don't know where to start. Should I start with basic grammar or try another method of learning?
@Holt
Thank you kindly!
May I have your recommendations of how to solve my problems mentioned above?
I mean, I don't know where to start. Should I start with basic grammar or try another method of learning?
caesar23
Jan 27, 2022
Writing Feedback / [IELTS Writing task 1] EU-born Science and Technology employees working in the US in 1999 [5]
Hello!
I am looking for help in correcting essays. I am not new to English, but I am not used to academic methods of writing. Therefore, I am trying to improve it. I hope we can help each other.
Here is my work:
The bar chart demonstrates the figures of Science and Technology European working in the US in 1999.
Overall, the British and the German accounted for the highest quantity of workers employed in the US, whereas the French and the Italians had the lowest number.
It can be seen from the chart that the French had the smallest amount of employees working in the US in 1999, with merely almost 5000 people, which is approximately 2000 people less than the Italians. That from other countries in Europe, the British and the German excluded, placed third in the chart with 20.000 people, almost double than the total of the French and Italian workers.
On the contrary, the significant number of British and German laborers were in first and second place with 28000 and 25000 people respectively. It can be calculated that the sum figure of the British and German workers employed in the US in 1999 was almost double than that of the rest of the Europe.
Thank you for your help.
Hello!
I am looking for help in correcting essays. I am not new to English, but I am not used to academic methods of writing. Therefore, I am trying to improve it. I hope we can help each other.
report for a university lecturer
Here is my work:
The bar chart demonstrates the figures of Science and Technology European working in the US in 1999.
Overall, the British and the German accounted for the highest quantity of workers employed in the US, whereas the French and the Italians had the lowest number.
It can be seen from the chart that the French had the smallest amount of employees working in the US in 1999, with merely almost 5000 people, which is approximately 2000 people less than the Italians. That from other countries in Europe, the British and the German excluded, placed third in the chart with 20.000 people, almost double than the total of the French and Italian workers.
On the contrary, the significant number of British and German laborers were in first and second place with 28000 and 25000 people respectively. It can be calculated that the sum figure of the British and German workers employed in the US in 1999 was almost double than that of the rest of the Europe.
Thank you for your help.
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