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The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities

The diagrams illustrate the renovation works which have been made on a small island for tourism.
It is clear that the island have witnessed some significant change in erection. There have been an abundance of facilities added for tourists such as accommodations and a restaurant.

Originally, the island was undeveloped. There were some trees located on the island while the rest was only an open space. Subsequently, two separated accommodation areas were constructed for travelers to stay. The reception was positioned in the middle, making it easy to access to the other places from here. Besides, the restaurant was also erected to serve the tourists' need.

Moreover, a simple traffic system was added to the island for commuting, with 2 types of road: footpath and vehicle track. Swimming and boating could be the recreational activities for the tourists because of the constructed pier and the beach. Although, the island was filled by many new constructions, no trees were cut down.

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