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Feb 28, 2022
Writing Feedback / Cambridge 10 Writing Task 3. Practice for my IELTS Exam - Working British students [2]
The bar chart illustrates what students did after finishing their graduate and postgraduate - excluding full-time work- in United Kingdom's college in 2008. The bar chart was measured by the number of graduate and postgraduate students. Overall, from the bar chart, it was clear that the highest destination for students graduates and postgraduates was further study after their graduations. Meanwhile, the lowest destination was voluntary work.
As shown in the bar chart, the study further was chosen by 29,665 graduates student and 2,735 postgraduates students and become the highest chosen destination after they are graduated. The part-time job came next chosen by 17,735 graduates. The number of postgraduates students who chose part-time jobs was almost similar to the number of postgraduates students who chose to study further with 2,535.
Meanwhile, the number of students being unemployed after graduation was 16,235 and 1,625 for graduates and postgraduates students respectively. Meanwhile, students showed less interest in voluntary work after they were graduated with only 3,500 and 345 graduates and postgraduates students respectively joining the voluntary work.
CAMBRIDGE 10 WRITING TASK 3
The bar chart illustrates what students did after finishing their graduate and postgraduate - excluding full-time work- in United Kingdom's college in 2008. The bar chart was measured by the number of graduate and postgraduate students. Overall, from the bar chart, it was clear that the highest destination for students graduates and postgraduates was further study after their graduations. Meanwhile, the lowest destination was voluntary work.
As shown in the bar chart, the study further was chosen by 29,665 graduates student and 2,735 postgraduates students and become the highest chosen destination after they are graduated. The part-time job came next chosen by 17,735 graduates. The number of postgraduates students who chose part-time jobs was almost similar to the number of postgraduates students who chose to study further with 2,535.
Meanwhile, the number of students being unemployed after graduation was 16,235 and 1,625 for graduates and postgraduates students respectively. Meanwhile, students showed less interest in voluntary work after they were graduated with only 3,500 and 345 graduates and postgraduates students respectively joining the voluntary work.
