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Mar 22, 2023
Writing Feedback / [Writing task 1] The number of cars made in three countries [4]
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Mar 21, 2023
Writing Feedback / [Writing task 1] The number of cars made in three countries [4]
The graph provides information about car production made in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand between 2003 and 2009.
Overall, there was a fluctuation in car quantity in Thailand and Australia. Meanwhile, Argentina tended to rise stably from year to year.
Regarding car production, Thailand made the most number of cars, but it had not a stable development. From 735,852 cars (2003) then it got the highest point at 1,162,356 one (2006). However, it dropped slightly after that with 999,963 (2009). Similarly, Australia also had the cut of making cars from 2003 to 2009. It got the highest point at 452,163 in 2003 and cut gradually in 2009 with its lowest point at 245,624.
In terms of the number of cars made in Argentina. This statistic showed a stable rise in car quantity between 2003 and 2009. In 2003, Argentina got the lowest one at 235,008 compared with other countries. However, despite dropping the number of cars made in Thailand and Australia, it also increased consistently in car quantity development, which records a high of 466,089 (2009).
The table below shows the number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006 and 2009.
The graph provides information about car production made in Argentina, Australia, and Thailand between 2003 and 2009.
Overall, there was a fluctuation in car quantity in Thailand and Australia. Meanwhile, Argentina tended to rise stably from year to year.
Regarding car production, Thailand made the most number of cars, but it had not a stable development. From 735,852 cars (2003) then it got the highest point at 1,162,356 one (2006). However, it dropped slightly after that with 999,963 (2009). Similarly, Australia also had the cut of making cars from 2003 to 2009. It got the highest point at 452,163 in 2003 and cut gradually in 2009 with its lowest point at 245,624.
In terms of the number of cars made in Argentina. This statistic showed a stable rise in car quantity between 2003 and 2009. In 2003, Argentina got the lowest one at 235,008 compared with other countries. However, despite dropping the number of cars made in Thailand and Australia, it also increased consistently in car quantity development, which records a high of 466,089 (2009).
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