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Feb 14, 2023
Writing Feedback / The pie chart below shows the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008. [2]
Task:
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My writing:
The pie charts give a breakdown of the share of Oscar winners by genre of film in two years 2003 and 2008.
It is noticeable that the Oscar-winning thriller category made up the largest proportion of Oscar winners in all two years. By contrast, comedy won the least prizes in this Award.
In 2003, 42% of the Oscars went on the thriller category. However, this figure experienced a significant by 5% after 5 years. Furthermore, Documentary and Action genres shared the same proportions with 13% in 2003, while there was a deep rise by 4% in Documentary, Award-winning action movies increased to 12% in 2005.
With regard to the Horror category, the proportion of winners increased from 7% in 2003 to 10% in 2005. Similarly, the figure for Science Fiction rose from 11% to 10% over the 5-year period. Finally, Romance and comedy genres had the same figures, remaining steady at 12% and 3% respectively.
Task:
The pie charts below show the share of Oscar winners by film genre for 2003 and 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
My writing:
The pie charts give a breakdown of the share of Oscar winners by genre of film in two years 2003 and 2008.
It is noticeable that the Oscar-winning thriller category made up the largest proportion of Oscar winners in all two years. By contrast, comedy won the least prizes in this Award.
In 2003, 42% of the Oscars went on the thriller category. However, this figure experienced a significant by 5% after 5 years. Furthermore, Documentary and Action genres shared the same proportions with 13% in 2003, while there was a deep rise by 4% in Documentary, Award-winning action movies increased to 12% in 2005.
With regard to the Horror category, the proportion of winners increased from 7% in 2003 to 10% in 2005. Similarly, the figure for Science Fiction rose from 11% to 10% over the 5-year period. Finally, Romance and comedy genres had the same figures, remaining steady at 12% and 3% respectively.
