HelenNguyen712
Jun 15, 2023
Writing Feedback / Task 1: yearly salary of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2001 [3]
The line chart indicates the yearly salary of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2001, measured in USD in 1- yearly intervals .
In general, as can be seen from the graph, income of Mari Bakeshop dropped, while both Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery rose. Although earnings of Bakeshop were the highest in three bakeries at first, it was the lower the end of period.
In the first year, the annual earnings of employer's Mari Bakeshop stood at 8000USD, then increased to about 9000USD in 2001. After 2005, it experienced a sudden plunge of 6000USD and continued fell around 4000USD in 2010.
At the beginning of period, in 2000, income of Amandine Bakery was initially almost higher than that for Bolo Cakery and remained relatively constant to around 6000USD for 4 years. After which it slowly grew to about 7000USD. Then, this figure jumped to over 10000USD in the end of period. In constract, yearly salary of Bolo Cakery was fluctuation slightly until 2002. The next year, it rose to 4000USD and comsistent grew to over 6000USD in 2010.
the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary
The line chart indicates the yearly salary of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2001, measured in USD in 1- yearly intervals .
In general, as can be seen from the graph, income of Mari Bakeshop dropped, while both Amandine Bakery and Bolo Cakery rose. Although earnings of Bakeshop were the highest in three bakeries at first, it was the lower the end of period.
In the first year, the annual earnings of employer's Mari Bakeshop stood at 8000USD, then increased to about 9000USD in 2001. After 2005, it experienced a sudden plunge of 6000USD and continued fell around 4000USD in 2010.
At the beginning of period, in 2000, income of Amandine Bakery was initially almost higher than that for Bolo Cakery and remained relatively constant to around 6000USD for 4 years. After which it slowly grew to about 7000USD. Then, this figure jumped to over 10000USD in the end of period. In constract, yearly salary of Bolo Cakery was fluctuation slightly until 2002. The next year, it rose to 4000USD and comsistent grew to over 6000USD in 2010.
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