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Aug 10, 2023
Writing Feedback / Writing IELTS Task 2: These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries [2]
... for tourism than in the past.
In this day and age when almost everything is modern and developed, it is flexible and easy for people to go abroad for tourism. Although the process of going abroad is sometimes more complicated than that in the past, its advantage indeed outweighs the disadvantage.
Firstly, tourism is one of the ways to develop a country's economy. In the past when we all hoped for more and more people to come and visit many beautiful destinations or heritage, but it could hardly be true because of where it is located. It is now an easier thing to achieve because of transportation. Imagine that airplanes don't exist - people in the other part of the world won't be able to visit many great places, to witness magnificent things with their own eyes. For instance, there are not that many people in Asia, or Europe willing to travel to Sydney without helicopters, or planes just to listen to opera; or are there so many people in America or France who would travel to Viet Nam to visit Vinh Ha Long without that comfortable transport?
Despite the advantage, there is indeed disadvantages to mention. People can take advantage of how easy it is to travel to another country, like bringing and selling illegal stuff abroad. More convenience means less access to personal intention, especially when they put their effort into hiding that. But it doesn't mean we can not overcome this by tightening security and raising people's awareness to avoid bad situations.
In conclusion, it is good to have more access to different countries for tourism. Not only it will contribute to the country's economy, but it also helps visitors widen their knowledge.
... for tourism than in the past.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In this day and age when almost everything is modern and developed, it is flexible and easy for people to go abroad for tourism. Although the process of going abroad is sometimes more complicated than that in the past, its advantage indeed outweighs the disadvantage.
Firstly, tourism is one of the ways to develop a country's economy. In the past when we all hoped for more and more people to come and visit many beautiful destinations or heritage, but it could hardly be true because of where it is located. It is now an easier thing to achieve because of transportation. Imagine that airplanes don't exist - people in the other part of the world won't be able to visit many great places, to witness magnificent things with their own eyes. For instance, there are not that many people in Asia, or Europe willing to travel to Sydney without helicopters, or planes just to listen to opera; or are there so many people in America or France who would travel to Viet Nam to visit Vinh Ha Long without that comfortable transport?
Despite the advantage, there is indeed disadvantages to mention. People can take advantage of how easy it is to travel to another country, like bringing and selling illegal stuff abroad. More convenience means less access to personal intention, especially when they put their effort into hiding that. But it doesn't mean we can not overcome this by tightening security and raising people's awareness to avoid bad situations.
In conclusion, it is good to have more access to different countries for tourism. Not only it will contribute to the country's economy, but it also helps visitors widen their knowledge.