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Brandon_Tuba   
Nov 14, 2009
Undergraduate / My english teacher as an influential person - Common App Prompt [4]

Although there are many people who have influeced my lie If I were to choose one person,it would be my eleventh grade English teacher, Mrs. Ostrenko. She is an extraordinary woman who has influenced me in myriad ways. She shows that being a teacher is not about teaching but also changing someone's life, whether it is significant or trivial.

"A teacher's greatest joy is seeing his/her students have success." These are the first words that came out of the mouth of Mrs. Linda Ostrenko on the first day of class. Not all students come to school excited to learn, but Ostrenko is the type of teacher that has the ability to make her class not only exciting, but memorable. Having taught for over ten years, she is still able to find the joy in teaching and remains as enthusiastic as ever about the topic she teaches. Her excitement about her subjects rubs off the students and makes her class fun and easy to understand. Not only did I learn more about English in one quarter from her class than I learned in my first two years of high school, but her influence allowed me to improve in all my other classes as well.

Mrs. Ostrenko may look like any other lady but what lies beneath the surface is a benevolent soul with perseverance that inspires those around her. It is the sheer willpower and self-sacrificing attitude that Mrs. Ostrenko demonstrates everyday that not only inspires me with the strength to overcome everyday obstacles, but also teaches me invaluable life lessons.

The influence that Ostrenko had on me is so much greater than those of other teachers that I have had. Her passion for teaching is evedent in every single lesson she teaches. Coming to class and witnessing Ostrenko's passion has inspired me to seek the same kind of passion in my life. She is more than just an inspiration; she is a mentor who has taught me the importance of education and balance in order to succeed. Ostrenko has become the teacher that I admire and will always remember.

hey i hope you dont mind, i edited your essay a little bit. It should flow a little more properly now. Just a couple of words of advice, look out for past/ present tense issues. you should pick either talking about her in the past or in the present. Use either is, does, etc... or use was, did, etc... it will work out better for you in the end. =]
Brandon_Tuba   
Nov 14, 2009
Undergraduate / "proper education" - A&M Essay: Topic B [3]

The prompt for this essay is to pick an issue and write an essay that explains the significance of the issue and relate it to you, your family, community or generation. I have written a rough draft but am looking for a more "meat" to be added to it. I'm also a little iffy on whether I answered the prompt well enough.

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In today's word, it seems impossible to do anything with out a proper education. Many things require you to have a background in which you have spent some time learning a process or being trained in a skill. Even something like flipping burgers at McDonalds requires training at Hamburger University in Chicago if you ever want to move into upper-management. This is why I believe that obtaining the highest education possible is the best goal that I can work towards.

The benefits of a high quality education are infinite. It provides a path for so much more than to do with your life than just graduating high school would, even if you don't go into the specific field you studied for in school. A higher education gives you more knowledge to solve problems with and gives you a stronger foundation to improve your situation. You can always use an education to get you somewhere in life.

Coming from a single parent home, I have personally seen how hard it is to sustain a good income on just a high school education. My only finished part of a year of college and I have seen her struggle for years to provide me a decent home and life for me and her. She has toiled for eighteen years to get to where she is today and all of her accomplishments have been the result of the tremendous amount of time and effort she has put forth into her work. But because of her lack of a higher education, she has to work so much harder to get even part of what someone else with a college degree would get for the same amount of time and effort as well as miss out on other things in life as well. I know this by comparing her to my uncle, who was able to finish college and now has an amazing job at an insurance company.

They are only one year apart in age and he makes about three times as much as my mother. He has been able to afford a large two-story home with about one hundred acres of land with many head of cattle. We also have a home with land, but it took my mother a significantly longer amount time to get to where she is now than it took my uncle. Both my mother and my uncle are at a level of management that covers an area of business locations, but because of my uncle's education, his area stretches over half of the United States while my mother's reaches across eight counties in Texas. Both of them, in my opinion, are exceptionally intelligent and skilled. They both are virtually the same when it comes to how they work and how well they know the businesses game, but the only difference between them is a college degree. That degree creates a huge difference in between their lives.

Another thing I think a higher education would give me is more flexibility than my mother has had while raising me Because of her having to work so much harder to get where she is today, my mother has missed out on many things that I have done in school and a large amount of time that we could have spent together as a family. I know that missing these things were not easy for her, but were choices that she had to make in order to provide for me. I believe that if she had had the opportunity to have finished college and obtain a degree, then she would have been able to create a better life for us both as well as have had enough time to be with me when we wanted to be together.

The reason I want a higher education is so that I can have an even better life when I get older than I had when I was growing up. I want to be able to make the money that my uncle makes instead of the money that my mom makes. I want to be able to have the time to spend with my children that my own mother didn't always have to spend with me. I believe that my mother is an extremely intelligent and successful woman, but I think that she could have gone so much further in life than did if she had gotten a college degree. My life will have so many more opportunities in it when I get a college degree.
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