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Dec 25, 2023
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1 Ielts - the inquiries volume [3]
The line graph illustrates the inquiries volume of the Tourist Information Office in one city over the course of six-month starting in 2011.
Looking at the graph, it is evident that while there was a downward trend in the inquiries numbers received by telephone, a steady increase was seen in the rest of inquiries receiving methods. Out of 3 communication ways examined, in-person inquiries registered the highest rank.
In January, the company received over 800 queries by telephone. This figures gradually increased to 1000 in May and surged 1600 afterwards. The change in in-person queries mirrored that of telephone one, reaching a peak of roughly 1900 in June and registering the highest figures out of 3 categories after 3 months.
A reverse pattern was witnessed in email inquiries. This communication method experienced a consistent drop in the first 3 months, halving to around 360 in May. This figure had no significant fluctuation afterwards.
The line graph illustrates the inquiries volume of the Tourist Information Office in one city over the course of six-month starting in 2011.
Looking at the graph, it is evident that while there was a downward trend in the inquiries numbers received by telephone, a steady increase was seen in the rest of inquiries receiving methods. Out of 3 communication ways examined, in-person inquiries registered the highest rank.
In January, the company received over 800 queries by telephone. This figures gradually increased to 1000 in May and surged 1600 afterwards. The change in in-person queries mirrored that of telephone one, reaching a peak of roughly 1900 in June and registering the highest figures out of 3 categories after 3 months.
A reverse pattern was witnessed in email inquiries. This communication method experienced a consistent drop in the first 3 months, halving to around 360 in May. This figure had no significant fluctuation afterwards.
