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Dec 25, 2023
Writing Feedback / WRITING TASK 1: INCIDENCE OF X DISEASE IN SOMELAND [3]
The given graph illustrates the number of cases of X disease in Someland in a period of time from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that there was a fluctuation in the proportion of being get X disease.
In 1960, the number of cases related to X disease was approximately 100. After that, there was a dramatically rise in the ratio from 1965 to 1975. The number rose from 200 cases in 1970 to 500 cases in 1975 and still remain until 1984.
In contrast, from 1984, there was a downward trend in the number of cases. The number plummeted from 500 in 1984 to over 300 in 1986 and then went down to zero in 1990. From 1988 to 1995, Someland was free of the disease.
In conclusion, the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.
The given graph illustrates the number of cases of X disease in Someland in a period of time from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that there was a fluctuation in the proportion of being get X disease.
In 1960, the number of cases related to X disease was approximately 100. After that, there was a dramatically rise in the ratio from 1965 to 1975. The number rose from 200 cases in 1970 to 500 cases in 1975 and still remain until 1984.
In contrast, from 1984, there was a downward trend in the number of cases. The number plummeted from 500 in 1984 to over 300 in 1986 and then went down to zero in 1990. From 1988 to 1995, Someland was free of the disease.
In conclusion, the graph shows that the disease was increasingly prevalent until the 1980s when it was eradicated from Someland.
