Undergraduate / "I am an Athlete" - UC Prompt #2 [9]

I think this essay is pretty good overall, but you need a more interesting start. I suggest you to start with the quote "I am an athelete".

Essays / Do I even need too use alot of Quotes in a essay? [8]

I don't think it is the quantity of quotes that really matters, as long as you have a couple of quotes that are used and described well, you will be fine.