Phongbeo12
Jan 16, 2024
Writing Feedback / A writting task 1 about some changes in an area [2]
The graph depicts the current Norbition industrial area and the orgarnized future development of the town.
First of all, It is immediately obvious that the town of Norbition has a lot of factories along the street. Moreover, in the north of the town, there is a river which goes from the west to the east, with a farmland located exactly above the river.
In the planned future development, the town has a variety of noticeable changes. The circle located in the middle of the town will have a new road that goes across the river to a housing area with farmland will be changed a little more to the left of the town. Furthermore, the town will become a residential area due to the increasing of housing places, a stores as well as Medical centre that located around the ring of the town. Not only that, but by that time in the future, Schools and playground will have been built in the East of the region.
The graph depicts the current Norbition industrial area and the orgarnized future development of the town.
First of all, It is immediately obvious that the town of Norbition has a lot of factories along the street. Moreover, in the north of the town, there is a river which goes from the west to the east, with a farmland located exactly above the river.
In the planned future development, the town has a variety of noticeable changes. The circle located in the middle of the town will have a new road that goes across the river to a housing area with farmland will be changed a little more to the left of the town. Furthermore, the town will become a residential area due to the increasing of housing places, a stores as well as Medical centre that located around the ring of the town. Not only that, but by that time in the future, Schools and playground will have been built in the East of the region.
