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Jan 21, 2024
Writing Feedback / Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones. Reasons, positive or negative development? [3]

These days, with the rapid development in science and technology, using smartphones for hours has became common to a large number of youngsters. There are many reasons behind this phenomenon and reaching an accord that it brings more harm than good.

In terms of causes, it is believed to be causes from two main things. Concerning the former reason, it is true that those smart devices bring lots of pleasure and comfort. Easy- touched screen, colorful lively graphics, along with ready availability make sensible gadgets, especially smartphones more appealing as well as favorable to citizens. Therefore, children, who are usually attracted by new things, seem to be easily addicted to phones. Turning to the second point, another chief root for this tendency can start from the way parents treat their children. In this day and age, when large business burden is put on every adults' shoulders, parent's time used for their offsprings lesser everyday, thereby, they have no other way except providing such devices for kids to entertain themselves. So, increasing time for using smartphones in children sounds legible.

From my perspective, the overwhelming use of cellphones by undergraduates can be deemed negative due to its severe effects on children's health and relationships. It is true that keeping eyes glued to screens for a long time may make pavements to various diseases, such as eye problems, obesity, scoliosis, to name but a few. To illustrate, many recent researchs have concluded that smartphones addiction takes a big portion in increasing the rate of having disability among children that may later on affect badly to their lives. In a social content, many people assume that this tendency bring obstacles to a child's communication. By this I mean, children too focus on their gadgets that they neglect real life relationships. Consequently, not only do they may have pessimistic introverted-like characters but they also lose enthusiasm from their loved ones.

In conclusion, the trend is prompted by the joy smartphones bring and parental loose supervision. I would opine this development negatively because of its adverse consequences. So, it is advisible to use them in a limited time.
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